Here are my ups and downs:
UP
The heat of the kitchen
It is true that it's a "busy" picture, but I kind of like that in a photo of kitchen. I voted on this one.
DOWN
Placing the Angel
Good idea. For me the picture is not sharp enough, The face of your girl is blurred. It also feels like the tree is going to fall to the right... the windowsill is lower on the right ... maybe you should have rotated a little bit.
These are my opinions, and I'm not a pro