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Old 21-05-12, 06:30 PM
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roche abbey waterfall

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HOW WRONG WOULD IT LOOK TO RUMMAGE IN YOUR POCKET WITH A GRIN INSTEAD OF A FROWN

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Old 22-05-12, 07:02 AM
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nice shot but i would have taken the people at the top out
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Old 22-05-12, 07:30 AM
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cheers, i dont use software that much so not sure how to edit them out
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Old 22-05-12, 11:21 AM
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from a slightly different angle

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Old 22-05-12, 12:16 PM
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Old 22-05-12, 12:16 PM
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heh clone nd heal tool=genius
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Old 22-05-12, 04:14 PM
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thats much better
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Old 22-05-12, 08:08 PM
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I'd like to lose the sticks in the lower middle of the image. I also think there's a lot of detail in the shadows to left & right of the waterfall that's been sacrificed to get a white blurred waterfall. It needs some postprocessing, to get the beauty of the weeds on the rocks.
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Old 23-05-12, 06:43 AM
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thats me stuck then lol
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I like that edited version Andy, the exposure on the water and surrounding areas is good. My only gripe really is the bright highlight between the trees in the background. Yes, the twigs could be cloned out and some dodging and burning if you feel up to it, and maybe a little...
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