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Old 19-11-11, 06:35 PM
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Could I have your feedback please !
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I took this photograph on my way to work this morning at about 10am. I was actually looking at something else when this caught my eye. Taken on an Olympus X-925 around llanrwst in North Wales, close to where i am lucky to live !. I am new to this and would be grateful for your advice and comments. Do you think this photo is marketable as i would ultimatley love to see a photo of mine in print !
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Old 19-11-11, 08:09 PM
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you appear to have forgotten to add the photo
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Old 19-11-11, 09:13 PM
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Sorry John but to me its very flat and nothing as a viewpoint, except a few trees and mist, have a look at this set http://www.photoradar.com/forums/showthread.php?t=7735 by another of our members Alf Branch and study those, but dont let me discourage you. As they say practice, practice and more practice. Oh and welcome BTW.
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you can see a photo????
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Old 19-11-11, 10:14 PM
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There is no photo on this thread but if you go to his gallery he has only one image .

Have to agree with littlebro the image is very flat and the composition needs work to inject some interest .

Keep at it .

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Old 19-11-11, 11:08 PM
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ah, OK, I never usually bother with galleries.
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Old 20-11-11, 05:17 PM
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Hi, thank you for your feedback, more practise meethinks !. Looked at the photos by Alf Branch and very envious of them. Could somebody please advise me on how to get the photo on the forum thread for future reference. Thank you
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Old 20-11-11, 09:02 PM
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Have a look here John.

http://www.photoradar.com/forums/showthread.php?t=1482
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I had a look at it.
Was it misty when you took it?
It needs either more contrats or I would try it in B&W myself.

The shots in my thread were taken on a very still morning around sunrise and the light is the key.

I would crop the a bit off the bottom of your shot.
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I hope you dont mind but I edited a version for you to give more contrast and saturation
Here it is but I will delete it if you want.


Untitled-3 by alfred.branch, on Flickr

As for you ambitions try readings this and some books
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