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Old 18-09-11, 05:56 PM
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Hi,

I am pretty new to this and was hoping to get a little feedback about this image and the others on my page.

http://www.photoradar.com/photos/144...tal-beach-huts

Many thanks,

Paul
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Old 18-09-11, 06:16 PM
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Old 18-09-11, 06:20 PM
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Interesting idea but for me personally if the sky is going to be the dominant part of the photo it needs to be far more dramatic. Its a shot worth pursuing though, just got to catch the sky right, well done.
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Old 18-09-11, 06:33 PM
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Nigel, Thanks for the reply it is appreciated.
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Old 19-09-11, 09:53 AM
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I like the shot concept, but the balance is a bit off. As Nigel says, the sky dominates the shot a little too much, and it could do with more land to balance it out
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Old 19-09-11, 11:23 AM
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I'd agree with the 2 above.

I always look at those huts and want to get an interesting image out of them, but there is usually something too distracting in front of them!
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Old 21-09-11, 09:04 AM
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Good shot, perhaps you need to crop the sky down to just above the cloud.
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Old 21-09-11, 06:58 PM
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I really enjoy it! It has a great simplicity and almost abstract quality. I might be tempted to get rid of the two contrails and maybe add a bit of a gradient to the sky - but then I'm an inveterate tweaker!
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Old 15-10-11, 08:05 PM
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Well done on getting your image into the HotSHOTS

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Old 17-10-11, 07:51 AM
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Thanks Mark and thanks to Photoradar for getting it noticed!!
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