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Old 05-08-11, 09:12 PM
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Cliff top HDR

Hi all,

Firstly ill say its not my best work, but as some of you now i hate HDR's, WEll heres one, loll, i got bored and havent been out in weeks so i ran down the bay, when i was there i new it wud have to be a HDR very flat and unitersting, used 6 or 8 different shots for this over a 6 stop range, So what do you think? have i over done it,

LEts have it then,......



Edit: forum sizeing has squashed it and made it look crap take a look ere for a better view,

http://www.photoradar.com/files/imag...itled-hdr2.jpg

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Old 05-08-11, 09:41 PM
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Dan, I think it looks great matey. Certainly not over done. If I was to pick - I'd darken the sky a little with an ND grad filter in lightroom/ps etc.

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Old 05-08-11, 10:11 PM
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I really like it Dan. The foreground is great. I really like rich, warm tones of the grass, contrasted by the green of the bush. The sky is just a tad overdone for my tastes and personally, would try and make that look a little more natural. There is also some cyan colour fringing on the white flowers and the coastline, where it meets the sky, and a couple of bits in the clouds.

On the whole, it gets a thumbs up from me, which is surprising, as like you, I'm not a huge fan of HDR either.
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Old 05-08-11, 10:17 PM
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Thanks for the comments Guys, Ive now noticed the fringing and on my working copy have removed it, and Tweaked the levels and such like, Im actually fairly pleased how it turned out,

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Old 06-08-11, 01:02 PM
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I like it Dan, not overdone like a lot are, if AMK hadn't said about the fringing I would never have noticed it, probably why I dont like commenting much on peoples photos.LOL.
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Old 06-08-11, 06:49 PM
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Looks pretty good to me Dan, though have you got a couple of dust spots in the sky, just above the cliff face, towards the righthand side?
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Old 06-08-11, 09:07 PM
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Thanks for the comments Guys, Cheers,

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Old 06-08-11, 09:57 PM
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I really like it too good work.....
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Old 07-08-11, 10:32 AM
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