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Old 30-04-11, 09:20 PM
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I attended my first studio photo shoot for over 20 years and this I think is my best shot from the day. How did I do, as I found it a very challenging day? Hats off to you guys who do fashion shoots for a living.
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Old 30-04-11, 09:38 PM
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I think you did very well, nice tones throughout, not sure if the eyes are a little dark.
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Old 01-05-11, 08:36 AM
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Thanks Gary! I agree her right eye looks a little dark as I think her hair was just shading it from the light, so I didn't get the catch light in it like her left eye. I might have to go and do a bit of cloning and dodging to see if I can improve upon it.
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Old 02-05-11, 09:30 PM
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I think you did very well, nice tones throughout, not sure if the eyes are a little dark.
I've just brightened her eyes a little. Is that better?
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Old 02-05-11, 09:41 PM
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Nice shot ian, its got a great feel to the shot, and nice detail, good for your first in 20 years.. ill be doing my first one in 19 years soon, bearing in mind im only 19...

im guessing the photo up now is the inproved, i do like the catch lights in the eyes,

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Old 02-05-11, 09:48 PM
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Thanks Dan! Yes the photograph now showing is the reworked version. I meant to do it a few days ago, but I've been busy either out and about, working and editing some more shots from the shoot.




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Old 05-05-11, 09:51 AM
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Old 05-05-11, 09:57 AM
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the first of the new ones is stunning, lovely lighting and a nice soft finish, really like it well done,

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Old 05-05-11, 01:39 PM
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No Dan, the model in the first pic is stunning! Personally, my favourite pic is the second one of the three.

I think you must fancy this model and that's why it's your favourite!
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Old 05-05-11, 02:26 PM
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Ian........ hmmmmmm she is, but i was refering to the lighting and the finsh on the picture aswell.... nice airy feel to it, LOL the second pic is great too, there all good really, hard to pick a favourite,

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