2 pix ... plz critique...

[jeeps805]

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[ABERS]

Image 1.
Good architectural record shot, well composed using the symmetry of the building and landscaping. The orange poster/placard in the foreground is a take-it or leave it item. It breaks up the overall repitition within the picture and inserts a bit of interest as to what it says.

Image 2.

The composition of this is great with the strong horizontals and verticals, and all held together with the chain link fencing.

The tree on the right intrudes too much and perhaps needs cloning out or cropping out altogether, and taking just a tad off the left making the picture square to emphasise the rectangles within the image. The big no-no for me is the bright sun on the horizon that distracts the eye from the rest of the picture.

[dan123]

nice shots, the first is really nice on the eye, great composition, it works well, the second, same as abers i like the lines and the fench looks great, really like it, im undecided about the sun, i can see youve used it to add something different, i think it would work, just needs a bit of tweaking thats all, but overall two great shots,

dan

[MattUK]

Nice shots, but they seem a bit oversaturated? Might be the tablet i'm viewing on though...