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Old 06-01-11, 10:58 AM
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Gentleman's Relish

Well here goes...

This is my first time posting in the photo critique forum. This image was taken at a friends wedding using just my basic compact camera. I converted to black and white and brought the colour of the bottle label back using layers. The image made me chuckle so I had to capture it for posterity

A Gentleman's Relish by Lemmiwinks The Gerbil King

I look forward to receiving your comments and advice.

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Old 06-01-11, 11:01 AM
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Hi Lemmiwinks,
The image isn't pulling through, can you have a go at re-posting?

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Old 06-01-11, 11:18 AM
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Think it is working now
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Old 06-01-11, 11:26 AM
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Hi Lemmiwinks,
Only critique is that the bottle appears to be leaning slightly, and there are some slightly distracting beads just to the left of the bottle (looking at the image) that could be cloned out.

One other touch,(but not sure if it would work or not) would be to add some colour back into the reflection of the label in the flower vase - it might prove more distracting though.

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Old 06-01-11, 01:41 PM
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I quite like the image but i agree that the bottle does seem to lean slightly to the right. Good shot :]
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Old 06-01-11, 02:15 PM
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Yes it does appear slightly "on the wonk", doesn't it?
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