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Old 02-01-11, 09:14 PM
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thanks for comments was a cold day indeedy.i always walk the canal its a short cut lol.the bulidng on the right is static home its on a bulding site thanks for comments is was just a quick snap as the man was walking away from me
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Old 03-01-11, 03:12 PM
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great shot, well done; i prefer the cropped version too :]
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Old 03-01-11, 03:49 PM
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I liked the cropped version better too. Also, I wonder what it would look like with a sepia tone.
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Old 03-01-11, 10:53 PM
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Love the shot Arnie, I can almost feel the moisture in the air.

The cropped version has more impact with less distraction and without unecessary canvass (the sky) in my opinion.

Is it my tired eyes or is the horizon tilting down from the left to the right just a tad?

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Old 04-01-11, 11:37 AM
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i not sure lol
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Old 04-01-11, 05:20 PM
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Cropped version works for me - maybe a contrast boost too. Apart from that, I like it.

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Old 04-01-11, 05:35 PM
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I like the shot alot better since the crop, although in my opinnion more could be done to make it stand out. First I would loose the vignette its not necessary. Then I would use dodge and burn tools to create more contrast in certain areas, such as the trees and the man walking using the burn tool on the grass too, then using the dodge tool on the path and the water. Mind you only sparigly and at a low %.

Still agreat shot arnie and I hope you dont mind me saying what I would do
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Old 04-01-11, 07:16 PM
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na mate i can take it im a big boy...how else to you progress is such a creative art form
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Old 07-01-11, 05:26 PM
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had another go at this quite different what you all think. preapre to open fire

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Old 07-01-11, 05:35 PM
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look well noisey need to srt then then reupload
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