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Old 20-07-10, 05:47 PM
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Old 20-07-10, 07:24 PM
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good one .slightly distracting lines on bridge of nose could possibly be blended out or softened,and possibly darken the lips a little to match tone of shadow beneath the eyes .
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Old 20-07-10, 07:47 PM
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She looks very pretty. Oh did you mean your job photographing her?
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Old 20-07-10, 08:17 PM
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Good shot Mark. The stray hair over the eye is distracting though...
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Old 21-07-10, 12:04 AM
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Nice framing, great idea. I agree about the stray hair (but it's difficult to clone out) and a couple of lines on her nose. I'd go for a little Levels Adjustment, increasing the contrast and whitening the eyes a little more and also a touch of darkening on the lips. (All this sounds quite critical but when you're so close to perfection anything to just give it that tiny bit more oomph will work well).
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Old 21-07-10, 06:51 AM
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I'd agree with everything that has been said, but would say as it is the nails that are the attention of this image (you have coloured them), its a shame the bottom ones are out of focus.
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