Critique desired.....

[jonypatterson]

Would it be possible for some of you to have a look at some of my photos and criticise... or praise? I need feedback to help improve my shots...please find the link below:

http://www.photoradar.com/photos/658...rson/cest-soir

Thank you so much in advance..

Jony

[chris-p]

Hi Jony

There are a lot of requests like this on these forums and you will usually get a better response if you pick a shot or 2 and post them directly into the thread and ask for C&C.

For example...



I like this shot. Good composition, strong lines and angles and the colour is good. lso, tt might lend itself to interesting colour changes like cross processing. The only thing I would try changing is removing some of the foreground as there is quite a lot of empty concrete on the left side of the frame and it looks a little bare.

I think this is quite a well balanced composition as it stands. I like the statement the bare concrete areas make, and the little block of bright green (lump of chalk or spray can top?) just adds enough to suggest the scene changes from time to time. - Though seeing graffitti gives me mixed feelings.

[jonypatterson]

Guys thanks a lot Chris and Andy, your thoughts are greatly appreciated...and Chris, I will take your advice and I am going to post my latest photo for everyone to comment on.

Jony