Comments on my portrait work please!

[triplezerophotography]

Hi,

If I could get some comments on my portrait work that would be appreciated!

Thank you.

[BenBirchall]

All good, apart from the top one. The composition is too cramped and the lighting is flat with nasty shadow. Also you've done a poor photoshop job on his right (left as we look) eye. Couldn't you get the guy into the studio?

Ben

[donoreo]

I agree, that one eye is "overworked". I do not like any of the subjects myself, the piercings are icky.

[creid]

I like the subject matter and the overall style (I love rockabilly / psychobilly music), it's the PP that's spoilt it for me. Overly white eyes and the chin on #3 looks really odd and soft, I'm sure I can see some brush / stamp marks near the edge of her jaw?? I'd like to see the originals as I bet there's not a great deal wrong with 'em.

Regards

Carl