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Old 18-07-12, 03:33 PM
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self portrait firt tim


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Old 18-07-12, 04:05 PM
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I like these photos. well composed and lit. They've certainly got atmosphere.
My only other observation would be that the second photo may work better as a black and white without the colour in the eye, and that the second and third are very central, and may work better with the face looking into the frame. But like I said, just my observations.
Overall very good, you should be proud.
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Old 18-07-12, 04:51 PM
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my thoughts too but had to guess were i was in the frame with trigger remotes ilwill have another go cheers buddy

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Old 18-07-12, 06:59 PM
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Like it. For me that works better.
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Old 18-07-12, 07:00 PM
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Like it. For me that works better.
With the eye I meant to say.
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