The second shot has great colours, but it's a shame that the wings are cropped and the background is messy, but sometimes it's difficult to do much about the background if you have limitations on where you can stand.
It may be worth not focussing in too tightly on the subject so you have some space around the birds, and then you can crop later.
Thank you Jediboy and Mark. I can see that I was and still am getting use to zoomingIwas trying my best too focus so much i think that i end up cropping out some of the birds on a lot of my photos taken that day . but practice and goals i will get there....... i hope O.o