I wonder if you have some with your model looking directly at the lens. Otherwise, I like what you've got. The B&W one has a strong contrast and could lose some empty space at the top. I'm left unsure whether they're 'environmental' portraits or something more intimate..... they kind of fall between the two.
Hi Geoff i do have some of the model looking towards the camera when I get 5 mins on the PC I'll will put some more up, I put this ones up as i like the way she looking, to me it looks like she thinking of some thing that made her happy in a dreamy sort of way
thanks for the Crit