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Originally Posted by deena
My other favourite was hedgehog's 'Pondlife'. Love the tone in this one (maybe would have been better if the sky wasnt blown out so much). Loved the idea of the little girl looking out over the pond. I think it would have been stronger if you had gone a little higher to get more of the pond in.
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Thanks for the critique, glad you liked it. Couldn't go any higher because you could see another (not quite so pretty bridge) over the other side but I see what you mean! I also agree with you about the blown out sky, but I'm still not sure how I would have corrected it- I might have a fiddle around with editing when I have some time! (The little girl was 20 year old me, too :P).
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07-09-11, 04:53 PM
Sorry about that
