langsett south yorkshire

[andydo]

[andydo]

[andydo]

critique please

[ianpinion]

Hi Andy, I like your second shot the best of the two. I'd of been tempted to point the camera over to the left a little more so that rock in the foreground was positioned more in the bottom righthand corner and the top of the stream more over to the right too. It might also benefit from a letterbox style crop.

I'm still thinking about your first shot at the moment about what suggestions to make. Again a letterbox style crop might be helpful or possibly a square crop?

[andydo]

1 OF THE OTHERS I TOOK

[dan123]

Nice shots andy, i prefer the second shot quite nice, although i like what youve tried to o with the 3rd shot, Imo i think the rock is to imposing and takes away from the scene,

Dan

[andydo]

a little cropped

[ianpinion]

Originally Posted by andydo

a little cropped

I like this one Andy, but again the rock in the foreground can overpower the scene. Your other shot just above is under-exposed, though the composition is much better.