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Old 25-05-11, 04:31 PM
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It's getting there Alf. The foreground looks great but, as you say, the greens still seem a little too bright.
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Old 26-05-11, 09:20 PM
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I have toned it down a bit more on this go


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Old 26-05-11, 10:12 PM
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It's getting better, Alf, but there's still a slight green cast to it. It's most noticeable in the clouds.
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Old 27-05-11, 06:16 AM
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Much improved Alf. The greens look much more natural now. I must admit that I do like to see these long exposure shots in colour rather than the almost obligatory mono where the photographer either doesn't know how to or can't be bothered to get rid of a cast.
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Old 28-05-11, 11:41 AM
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I had another go and I am learning a lot from this stuff


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Parton beach 7 by alfred.branch, on Flickr

This time I created a coour balance layer and sorted the cast that way after doing most of it with the white balance in ACR
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Old 28-05-11, 05:06 PM
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Great correction work! Looking really good now
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