You've got some really good, bold shots in that set. For me, it's mixed overall.
I'll post some in here and try to explain what I mean...
First of all - this one works really well...
It's bold, colourful and well balanced. Personally I'd crop it in a little from the edges but otherwise I like this.
This next one is a good attempt as well, but you've not quite pulled it off perfectly. It's a little too bright but you've used leading lines and the bold shapes to give some direction to the photo. It's a bit blurry as well.
But, like I said, it's a mixed bag for me. This next one doesn't work because it's got no real centre of attention. The ghostly moving people in these don't really work for me at all. You've also got the shadow of your camera and tripod in the shot...
This last one does and doesn't work all at once. Compositionally it's good. Like some of the others it's bold and strong but the fading desaturation doesn't do anything at all except make you feel like the centre of the photo is too saturated.
I would suggest looking for tighter compositions - keep your photographs more focused. You've got blur in a lot of these shots which could be the mirror moving around so I would also suggest damping you camera movement. The techincal bits are easy to sort though.
My advice is to spend more time looking and positioning the camera carefully. Look at the edges of the frame and make sure there isn't too much or too little space, that you've not cutt the top or bottom off something and that things aren't either poking in or falling out the sides of the frame.