Coronation Walk.

[Reinardina]

Cutter gave some advice on how to improve this picture.

(I like this one , but feel you could have edited it better. I think the view down into the mist is the picture, I would crop to just infront of the first 2 trees and make it equal distance either side of the trees, this would make it more lanscape and it would get rid of the bench which tends to draw your eye from a better view. Alos you need to clone out the two posts in the road. But this is only my opinion. but would love to see it if you did )

I had a go and this is the result:



I think it does look better this way, but all comments/advice/critique is welcome.

I certainly prefer the revised edited version, and like the moody atmosphere and balanced softness to the image. Although the original version looks a little brighter and accordingly seemingly sharper, depending upon the light level you remember at the scene will determine whether you apply a boost to the Contrast or alteration to the White Balance. That said, the edited version is quite dreamy and poetic, and I like it a lot.

[Cutter]

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