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02-12-09, 10:55 PM
Join Date: Jul 2009
Thank you for your comments. I prefer the black and white to the colour version of Aysgarth falls too. I felt I should have moved over slightly to my right for the shot of the gallery and it would have worked better, but that meant standing in the middle of a busy road and health and safety said the risk of injury was too great!
The landscape looks lovely and the sky has enough clouds in to be interesting but with the whole scene being side lit you can see all the texture in all the surfaces.
If you want some criticism on this one, move the camera slightly to the right and keep the edge of the road within the frame (unless you loose the tin shed).
I would have done, but there was a van parked on the verge there that rather got in the way. It looked better keeping it out of shot.
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