Los Dos Hermanas (The Two Sisters)
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11-07-12, 05:41 PM
Join Date: Mar 2012
I really like this, great eye contact with nice catchlights too. As a candid it works really well. However,as it's in the critique thread I'll add this: you could afford to crop the image at the top; it's a shame the top of the girl's hat on the left has been cropped out as it would have matched the other's hat; the top of the other girl's hat is overexposed, likewise her blouse; and yes the bloke in the background can be noticed if you look hard enough. To be honest I wouldn't go to the extreme of cloning him out, it's a candid, surely there should be some defects?
I don't mind the younger girl being out of focus as it's the other one who steals the limelight for me. As to the other points I highlighted they're not much really and I think you've done well.
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