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Old 11-07-12, 03:58 PM
markgozz markgozz is offline
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A really beautifully captured shot the interaction between the older girl and the younger girl is perfect and really shows true emotion , however I find the composition a bit constricting from the sides and perhaps it could stand to loss a bit from the top . The other thing that keeps catching my eye is what looks like a chap in a hat in the bottom left corner , you have a lovely soft neutral background at the top so I'm sure it wouldn't take much to clone that into the bottom corner to balance things up .
It is such a lovely shot I feel as if I'm nit picking but one more thought , the older girl is pin sharp from her nose to the back of her hat but the little girls face seems a bit soft in comparison , it may of needed a narrower aperture to deepen the DOF or the focal point needed to be slightly forward of where it is .

Do you have a wider crop or is this the full image ?

Mark
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