Along Chelsea Embankment
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21-06-12, 08:14 PM
Join Date: May 2011
I can't help looking at the slope on the first image rather than the scene itself , also the composition doesn't quite work for me as the path and wall seem to draw my eye out of the scene and not into it .
The second image I feel has too much water without any interest in it and it seems to be suffering from barrel distortion .
The third like the second I think could have a large amount of the foreground water cropped out , otherwise it's a really nice and interesting shot .
The fourth shot is a nice crop but I find the buildings in the background a bit distracting , a shallower DOF may help focus the attention back on the Union Jack .
The final shot is my favourite by far and the B&W conversion works really well giving the image an almost 60's look , very nice .
As always these are just my thoughts .
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