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My critic isn't with the photo but the score. It looks like you have burn't the edges yourself. At some point you will all learn im a bit of a halloween geek and burning edges is something I have learn't through years of setting of fire alarms.
Anyhow set alight to the bottom corner and hold the paper upright and let the flame rise. Another trick is to mix it up in a bunch of papers and throw into a fire as a reem when you see blackening spreading your there.
Anyhow the photo looks good to me. The glow around the flame could do with not being there though. A quill and spilt ink may have been a nice touch (instead of the wine). Not saying it would look better just an idea that popped in my mind. Funny you post this as is was only yesterday I had an urge to do a photo with candle and candle light, did get round to it though as the laptop was being slow so I set it to maintenance.
After another look I may have been tempted to light the glass slightly with a torch or something.
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