I think all the photos you've taken are technically spot on with great detail and perfectly exposed and put all together with a brief explanation make a fascinating set of image that do the subject matter proud .
I'd also like to say how impressed I am with the sculpture itself , the workmanship that went into it is second to non and I'm sure that anyone connected with the Chatham Historic Dockyard would be very impressed with your work .
Well done on a great set of very powerful images .
Mark
However I'd still leave the roof and shell shots to one side
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