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24-11-09, 08:09 AM
Join Date: Oct 2009
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Hi Foggie, welcome to the fourms.
Good shots. I like the colour in them and they look good and sharp. One the first one I would try a panoramic crop. There isn't much interest in the foreground of the shot so you could crop some of the bottom out and bring the horizon closer to the bottom of the frame leaving the sky intact.
In the second shot, the only thing I would have done differently would be to try to change perspective to bring the jetty closer into the bottom right corner of the frame. You would loose some of the reflection of the uprights but the top of the jetty wouldn't be obscuring the landscape.
Having said that, I really like both shots!
Thank you ! I liked them was wodnering about the jetty sadly it is under water at the moemnt with the flooding .. will be reshoooting these onceI have some filters as wish to get them just about right I thought maybe the jetty needs liftin Ie shooting fro lower down or higher up to give some psae but the main problem with that is equipment lol I only have a cheapo tripod and no ND filters so this was best could do at the time ... ND 's are on order and tripod will be earlly next year ..... bloomin expensive this DSLR lark lol
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