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If it was my profile I'd leave out the "looking for beginner, amateur and professional models" and just put 'looking for models'
I'd leave out "I do not have any 'studio lighting' or backdrops so" and just say 'I prefer to use natural light only' - you don't want to emphasise negative aspects of what you don't have rather emphasise what you do.
I'd leave out the "After the photo shoot and after I process the photos at home," paragraph and just say you're happy to work on the 'time for CD basis' as this term is clearly understood and how and wherev you process your shots is not important.
I'd leave out "You do not have to pay me as I'm a beginner, but " completely, you are unlikely to be approached by people wanting to pay you as you have no history, you're more likely to have to pay someone to help you. Again, don't emphasise the negative aspect (I'm a beginner)
I'd leave out 'depending on where you live' as it's unnecessary, just say you can travel up to 20 miles.
it's if 'you're' interested, not 'your interested'.
Last edited by Cathus; 06-01-12 at 10:14 PM.
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