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For a first effort they're excellent but one or two have little problems....
One (0138) appears to be out of focus - that might have been deliberate but a non-photographer might think it's accidental.
One or two could have been cropped a little tighter, getting rid of some empty wall space.
Eyes are not quite sharp enough in some - the lens appears focused elsewhere.
I think it's very rare that studio portaiture can get away with unsharp eyes or eyes without catchlights - that's what brings them alive.
Overall, though, I think they're very good.
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