Hi Phil,
I really like this image. I think the composition works very well and I also love the lighting in it.
In my mind, I picture this having been taken at night, as the driver and guard, clock off work after another hard day on the rails. The moonlight, so bright, that it illuminates the wet paving slabs underfoot as they make their way to the pub for a pint of ale before closing and heading home for their supper.
For me the picture has a wonderful aged quality to it like something from the 1950's, when virtually every little boy wanted to grow up and be a train driver. I also get the impression of Wales or Yorkshire.
Great work