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keyserj 09-01-13 07:58 PM

Animals, flowers, cars & helicopters
 
Hi All

Below are photographs of several subjects for review, hopw you enjoy them...

[IMG]http://media.digitalcameraworld.com/forum/gallery/files/1/5/5/3/1/4/img_4453.jpg[/IMG]

Peakaboo!!!

[IMG]http://media.digitalcameraworld.com/forum/gallery/files/1/5/5/3/1/4/img_4440.jpg[/IMG]

Anybody home???

[IMG]http://media.digitalcameraworld.com/forum/gallery/files/1/5/5/3/1/4/img_3908.jpg[/IMG]

Bokeh of flowers

[IMG]http://media.digitalcameraworld.com/forum/gallery/files/1/5/5/3/1/4/img_1855.jpg[/IMG]

Waiting for a spin...

[IMG]http://media.digitalcameraworld.com/forum/gallery/files/1/5/5/3/1/4/img_1760.jpg[/IMG]

Helicopter take off

[IMG]http://media.digitalcameraworld.com/forum/gallery/files/1/5/5/3/1/4/img_1269.jpg[/IMG]

Eye-ris

[IMG]http://media.digitalcameraworld.com/forum/gallery/files/1/5/5/3/1/4/img_1209.jpg[/IMG]

A "do nothing" day

[IMG]http://media.digitalcameraworld.com/forum/gallery/files/1/5/5/3/1/4/img_1064.jpg[/IMG]

Man's best friend

[IMG]http://media.digitalcameraworld.com/forum/gallery/files/1/5/5/3/1/4/img_0295.jpg[/IMG]

Driveway Lights

Regards,
Justin

markgozz 09-01-13 10:05 PM

In the first shot I like the way you have got the eye contact but it does leave me wanting to see more , I've got no idea what the bird is but it does look beautiful . May be this was your intention .

The buggy and helicopter shots I feel are a bit cramped and could do with a different crop .

Man's best friend is another very nice image but again my taste would be to crop off a little more of the left hand side , I think if the dog was looking out to the left it would probably work as it is but because he is looking towards us I don't think the extra space is needed .

Mark

keyserj 10-01-13 04:25 AM

[QUOTE=markgozz;86287]In the first shot I like the way you have got the eye contact but it does leave me wanting to see more , I've got no idea what the bird is but it does look beautiful . May be this was your intention .

The buggy and helicopter shots I feel are a bit cramped and could do with a different crop .

Man's best friend is another very nice image but again my taste would be to crop off a little more of the left hand side , I think if the dog was looking out to the left it would probably work as it is but because he is looking towards us I don't think the extra space is needed .

Mark[/QUOTE]

Hi Mark

Thanks for the comments :), that was the intention with my first photograph, as for the bird I have a few other shots in full view, the mail weaver is bright yellow and the female a bit duller as in the photo below, will post some more detail this evening. I also have another photo of the dog looking to the left, will definitely take up your advice on the crop. The buggy shot is unfortunately not a crop, my idea was to focus on the driver and his co-pilot with the buggy as a secondary/lesser focal point, but i understand what you mean by the two photos seeming cramped.

Will continue to post photos, as I said previously I am still very new to photography and am looking to improve.

Regards,
Justin


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