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foggy day at bridlington
all critique appreciated as always
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A nice milky water effect. Loks like your horizon is a bit wonky but that can be sorted. Cant quite make out (but im only viewing it on my phone screen) where your main point of focus is. Nowhere seems pin sharp.composition is spot on.
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cheers dd have a good hol think i should have focused on the 1st stumps my tripod spirit level was bang in the middle so i cant understand why it came out wonky unless the wind knocked it, it was evil out there yestada
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Horizon line is off but as said easy fix. There is a glow either side of the photo that distracts me and the colour is just in the in between stage of effect looking for and awkward. Maybe a slight boost of blacks would get the colour just there.
I like the idea and picture. I love that the leading line disappears and leaves you floating on the water. It could be a good shot for a moody B&W conversion. |
It's a nice calm image, tranquil.
But like DD says the focus could be better, but I don't think it's bad. the horizon however is in need of straightening. And did you use a polariser? The sky has a darker Band in the middle and is lighter at the edges??? |
A serene image that unfortunately is marred by the horizon and confused focus. Perhaps your tripod slipped in the sand and your focus was knocked. Yes, it does look like a polariser has been used which has left that banding in the sky. I personally don't think a black and white conversion will do it any favours, the pastel tones add to the tranquillity.
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horizon straightened
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That's better.
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i did use a nd grad polariser which i seem to be having problems with lately sometimes the shots turn out ok and other like have been mentioned come out with the hazes of colour. i tried the black n white conversion but the fog just clashes. tranquil lol it was far from it
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off to sunny cleethorpes tomorrow so will try again
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