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The eye's certainly do grab your attention a lovely focal point but for me I think the composition is slightly off , with her hair blowing off to the right I think that the empty area on the left is just wasted space and could be cropped out and then may be a bit more space added to the right .

Mark

[QUOTE=markgozz;76304]The eye's certainly do grab your attention a lovely focal point but for me I think the composition is slightly off , with her hair blowing off to the right I think that the empty area on the left is just wasted space and could be cropped out and then may be a bit more space added to the right .

Mark[/QUOTE]

Thanks :)

She's a beautiful girl, there's no doubting that! Its a sharp shot but for me the highlights down the right hand side of her face and neck are blown out and her eyes are a little over-processed. I like the composition though.

This is a very striking and intimate portrait. I actually quite like the dramatic side-lighting (which is all the rage in fashion ads at the moment), and the fact that the composition breaks the 'rules'. The model's flowing hair and the space out to the left give it an on-the-fly feel that I really like, but it still has a professional, polished finish. I can just picture the logo of some famous perfumerie in the bottom right!

Thanks all :)