my favourite model
 

<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/johendley/4110388907/" title="jen lightplay 11 15 09 by johendley, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2611/4110388907_659232c029.jpg" width="337" height="500" alt="jen lightplay 11 15 09 " /></a>

Hi Jo, the "Share this" link HTML only really works in Flickr, you need to paste the full URL of the picture "http://farm3.static.flickr.com/blah/1233744575.jpg" in the Insert Image pop-up, click on the icon that looks like a picture in the tool bar directly above the message window.

Your model looks great, the pose and composition are great but the L/H side of her face is too dark, as is the L/H side of her legs which makes one leg look thinner than the other.

Regards

Carl

Just for simplicity, here is the image...

[img]http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2611/4110388907_659232c029.jpg[/img]

I like the lighting although, as Carl has mentioned, I would like a little more light to show a bit more definition in the face.

Nice shot although light from toe to face would have been nice, to much detail lost in the face.